Scientific writing for young investigators
November 6, 2009 1:23 am Fantasy这个星期开始了一个大概叫《高级生物学英文论文写作》的workshop,讲课的老师是个在港大待了20来年的老外,Iain C. Bruce,因此对中国人写paper时的困难和通病还是有一定了解的,讲起来比较有针对性。除了第一节课是30个人的general introduction外,之后是3个一对一修改的section。从目前看来还是很实用且有成效的,通过和他逐句讨论自己paper中的问题,突然可以以一个比较新的视角去发现原来存在的问题和一直忽略甚至走入误区的东西。
我承诺要写个要点介绍或是收获分享,明天组会要用,也贴这里共享下吧。
伊特别强调写journal paper的重要性,我记住了这样几句话:
You can never be a professional scientist without being a professional writer.
Writing scientific publication is always painful; I enjoy writing some other stuff but not journal papers.
You should use most simple English to give information as clear as possible. It's not about using fancy words and structures to impress the editor or reviewer, but to make it easily
understandable. The less time they spend on the tricky expressions, the easier it could be published.
还有一个短语他用了不下十遍:
No matter you feel like it or not,
No matter how painful you feel to start,
Whether you have new idea or not,
… …
安慰啊,天下人民一般苦 ,不只我们天朝。
一些习惯可能有所帮助:
1. 设定合理的目标。
2. 准备一个Everyday book,读paper时摘抄特定语境下好用的表达方式和句子结构,长此积累便于更精准的表达问题。
3. 在一个特定的,干扰较少的固定时段每天坚持写作,长此以往。。。。。。
1. Make plan
2. If you do it every day, the pain of the deadline goes away.
4. 读一些高质量杂志上,专业人士写的半科普类文章,总结其写作技巧。
推荐书目
• RICHARD DAWKINS: The Selfish Gene (1989); The Extended Phenotype (1982); The Blind Watchmaker; (1986) Climbing Mount Improbable (1996); The Ancestor’s Tale (2004)
• STEPHEN JAY GOULD: I Have Landed (2002)
• PETER MEDAWAR: Advice to a Young Scientist (1979)
• LEWIS THOMAS: Late Night Thoughts (1983); The Youngest Science: Notes of a Medicine-Watcher (1983)
5. 写的时候,一气呵成往下写,不要总是回头去编辑修改,把所有细节都写下来,回头再整体删改,有助于paralle processing和新想法的延伸。
6. 写初稿时的建议顺序:
• Results & Discussion together: Result 1& its discussion, Result 2& its discussion…
• Methods - 覆盖所有结论和讨论中涉及到的数据
• Introduction – creative writing
7. 重新组织,理顺逻辑。
Introduction - Why did you do it?
Methods - How did you do it?
Results - What did you find?
Discussion - What does it mean?
8. Abstract
需要短小精干且包含上述4点
9. 重视instructions for authors,了解所投杂志的具体要求、发稿倾向等。
10. 删除或尽量避免:
ABBREVIATIONS
ADMINISTRATE
CAN, COULD
COMMON≠POPULAR
EQUIPMENTS,
RESEARCHES, EVIDENCES
ETC, AND SO ON
OBSERVED
OBVIOUSLY
OUT-OF-DATE TERMS
RESPECTIVELY
SIGNIFICANTLY
THERE IS/ARE/WAS/WERE…
11. 时态:
Your own results – past tense;
published results - present tense
12. 数据的陈述要明确、有力
• “We showed that x can increase z”implies uncertainty. Your findings are real, so say “We showed that x increased z.”
• Do not use “could” or “can” for data (yours or others).
• These words fit speculative discussion, where uncertainty does exist.
记住的大概就这些,说起来似乎也没啥特别的,改起来,伤筋动骨啊。

Rainbowrain :
Date: November 6, 2009 @ 1:38 am
啊 多少年过去了 我终于写了个学术贴
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hedgehog Reply:
November 6th, 2009 at 1:42 am
真好
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tsing Reply:
November 6th, 2009 at 1:48 am
顶印教授学术贴 很有指导意义
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tsing :
Date: November 6, 2009 @ 1:49 am
“You should use most simple English to give information as clear as possible. It’s not about using fancy words and structures to impress the editor or reviewer, but to make it easily understandable. The less time they spend on the tricky expressions, the easier it could be published.”
这个可以用it民工的keep it simple, stupid来概括吗
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Rainbowrain Reply:
November 6th, 2009 at 11:29 am
你竟然看了这篇~
赞学术IT民工
你的高度总结相当好
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georgexsh Reply:
November 6th, 2009 at 2:30 pm
其实tsing说得是kiss
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Rainbowrain Reply:
November 9th, 2009 at 12:16 am
keep it simple and smart~
hedgehog :
Date: November 7, 2009 @ 1:16 am
我想问 could can 和 there is/are 为啥要少用
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Rainbowrain Reply:
November 8th, 2009 at 12:47 am
could/can 参见12
These words fit speculative discussion, where uncertainty does exist.在英语语境下,并不单是表“能”。
少用there be大概是为了让文字更精练吧,主谓宾,嗒嗒嗒,最清晰明确。这一点,我觉得也有他personal bias的可能性吧。
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hedgehog Reply:
November 8th, 2009 at 1:02 am
那换成able to或者enable,entail?
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Beardnan :
Date: December 27, 2009 @ 12:19 pm
香港的吧。
这人怎么到处讲这个事儿啊,
好几年前就受教于斯,
当时也是哈醍醐灌顶,倍感亲切啊,
后来还不是执行不下去,
国情差太多了。
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Beardnan :
Date: December 27, 2009 @ 12:23 pm
update:不过有一条的确是很有用的,就是,一气呵成的往下写,写完了最后再回头修改,不管觉得刚刚写的句子和内容有多么的狗屎。
后来觉得这条特管用,修改总比一清二白的写,要简单多了。
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